A Revolving Sense Poem by Abdul Wahab

A Revolving Sense

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I close my eyes fast
To wash the negatives
To deliver a sweet picture
Of my emotions which I have got
In my pregnant senses
I check all the points
But no ways I find to trade
The strangeness of it that
It keeps revolving in my head
A lousy headache I feel
But I can not throw it
Or put it down as I do not see
The rays of means in the dark

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 04 May 2013

A lovely poem, Initially you made it positive through the brightness of thought you crept in dark.....keep on your hope never give up, ,

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a rich poenread and enjoyed

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