A Red Crab In The Garden Poem by Leela Panikar

A Red Crab In The Garden

Rating: 5.0


I came out of river water, I saw,
A cat. Afraid I stopped in awe,
My eyes two short matchsticks, scoping.
Quietly I crawled sideways hoping
Not to be seen. Fat-cat in ginger fur coat
Face smiling, and white his throat.
Sunning. Lying on garden seat
With eyes open sleeping, quite a feat.
Branches a-shiver with bird notes. Hot
I crept under an overturned pot,
waited, then keeping to shadows
I moved looking for other burrows.

Veni, vidi, vici…well almost vici

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One morning a red crab crept into our garden while Spooks, our cat, was sunning on a chair. The kept to the shadows of the wall. We are about 200 metres from a small stream.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 February 2019

i plan to put this, with other PH poems from MyPoemList, into my usually-monthly Showcase of PH poems. it will be a title, beginning with March 2019, in my list of PH poems on my PH site. thanks! bri :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Leela D. P. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Ernest Makuakua 16 December 2015

nice piece i love it

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