A Recitation Poem by Peter Gumbo

A Recitation

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My love you are a poem with its own description:
The assonance of your whispers,
The rhyme in scripted in your voice,
The themes that outline your body,
The repetition that characterizes the blink of your eyes,
The tonation of your laughter,
The persona Created in your characteristic smile,
The onomatopoeic rush of your feet,
The alliteration of your speech,
The imagery buried within your face,
The metaphor in the brightness of your eyes that likens to the stars,
And the personification of your words that fills them with reality.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melia Candelaria 30 October 2007

this was awesome! ! ! it swept me into it and held me to the end. u can realy tell that u care for this person u are writing about. great! !

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Amy Burles 03 August 2007

Using poetry as an extended metaphor, really clever and effective.

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Anthony Mburu 03 August 2007

This poem portrays the loving nature in human beings-An excellent piece of work

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Boniface Maithya 17 July 2007

This is creativity at its best.comparing human attributes with poetic devices is genius

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