* *~a Reason To Cry~* Poem by Eyan Desir

very sentimental and may you always cherish that special woman, a rich poem indeed.

The woman I hold Closest to my soul Her sweetness matches the angel from up high Her beauty within Outshines yellow roses Only found in paradise....poem raised in her honor.... lovely sentiments....10

An ode to unconditional love. It, s so beautiful. You made my day. Thanks

Lips of tenderness Moist blue cirrus clouds A virtuous woman Never makes one sad A voice of substance Penetrates the core. The woman I hold Closest to my soul Her sweetness matches the angel from up high Her beauty within Outshines yellow roses Only found in paradise. Having her in my life Fills me with gladness Knowing the flame of love Burns within her heart Bring tears to my eyes........ this woman is compared to an angel in heaven...this is also a dedication to ur girl...a sincere feelings to the subject...the tears here in the last line, is a a tear of joy and this tear is from u...so, nicely done ian...of course, i cant dare not to read ur poem..ur so dear to me..ooooo, acknowledged ur invitation dear, i read, i undersatnd, i left my commnt, and gonna goooooooo....lavs ya lavs ya...

Love the sincere feeling to it... Almost as if I was feeling like that just now. Thank you. Great poem, I really enjoyed reading it. -Trysta

THIS GIRL HITS YOU HARD YOUR WORDS ARE DRIPPING WITH LOVE TO HER AMAZING ARE THE LINES TOO

a very simple dedication to one you love... and yet it seems almost like empty words, I do not know how to explain it. I feel there could have been more discriptive. I liked it but I believe you can do better, I believe you can paint a much prettier picture then you have. Perhaps I am hard to please as you have recieved so much praise for it, Simon I shall be but I find it's lacking, it is missing something.

Sweet, beautiful, and romantic. Such poetic words can make a woman weep.

everything from ur word choice, ur meaning, the color, just the over all picture you paint oozez ur emotion and wutz on ur mind and heart. u write wit ur heart on ur sleeve and ur not afraid to shout at the heavenz. we need more of that! love, heart of ice!

Song of a true lover. Fantastic. Its a blow soft but hard at the same time to the loveless passion of our highly technological 21st. Real reason of cry is undoubtedly love when someone surrenders to a hand to sleep in deep. Joy of being the honest shelter to anchor a heart with belief.....makes the cry where lover is not a conventional egoist entity, his heart also finds a shelter to sleep in solitude. Great writing. Really unique. Live long.....write more........ Regards, 10++ pranab