A Rare Vision Poem by Valsa George
A Rare Vision
On the woolly folds of sleep, I sailed to a place
Where thoughts and fancy made an alliance
A place that never existed anywhere on the Earth
And never seen or glimpsed by any human eyes
Before me I could see in glistening sheen
A rare beauty and a rare grandeur
That heaven seemed to have come down to earth
And the sky and the Earth draped in great splendor
All about me was liquid silver’s dazzling glow
With eddy swirls and falling beams
Above me was the vast panorama of the sky
With chiffon clouds straying far into the seams
Soon I found myself in the cool seclusion of trees
With several rows of flowers bordering the fringe
It looked the angels’ most frequented haunt
From where they gathered blooms of varied tinge
The boughs of trees drooped with blossom’s weight
Leaves trembled in the might of passing gales
Tickling rills and somersaulting cataracts
Gave a heavenly dimension to half lit vales
The meadows were dotted with violets and bluebells
Also with clusters of flowers that never seemed to fade
Sweet birds were heard singing on every bush and tree
Below, golden sunbeams played, filtering through the shade
In full mirth I coursed through the planes
Where ever I looked, I found all so fair to view
Gorgeous visions flashed and dimmed
And everything was clad in heavenly hue
Though freed from slumber’s entangling mesh
I refused to open my eyes to detain my dream
How I wished I could continue to roam
In that celestial plane, my fancy’s chimeric realm
A beautiful dream that has no beginning and end to leave it ever!
A lovely and wonderful dream of poetess of this poem so nicely and aptly penned having attractive and heart touching phraseology. I enjoyed this poem very much with the beautiful picture provided......10
Thank you for sharing your blessed dream world with us. My vision is also amazed and enriched by its tranquil beauty! lovely work!
A gorgeous write that makes ones soul wish to reside in this stunning paradise. This has to be where the true spirit of beauty lies which could only be assessable through our dreams or after a pious life. I love the accompanying picture of Snow White which made me think of a pure soul.
The enchanting, mesmerizing poem transport me immediately to the dream land.Thanks for presenting us this wonderful poem.
wow beautiful imagery drawn in front of our eyes and a wonderful picture too! Thanks for sharing Mam.
Valsa! ! you made me walk every bit of space, keeping pace with you along the lines. this is heaven on earth. This is what i visualize when i do the yoga sometimes. and so doubly enjoyable. Once again you have taken me on a flight to fantasy. At least until the time i came to the end of the poem, you took me 'far from the maddening crowd' enchanting picture too..
With a lovely imagination you drew this landscape of a pleasant and a comforting space where the mind remains in peace and tranquility. It is so pleasing to read this poem what drags me to a place of joy and pleasure with a calmness. Loved it, Valsa.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wish I could see and live in that dream world too. Nice imagery. Love it.