A Rainbow Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Rainbow

Rating: 5.0


Have you ever seen
A rainbow over the mountain?
It is like a crown
Put on its tip
Showing to the world
Its grandeur and glory.

Have you ever thought
The rainbow that spread
Across the vast sky
Is like a ring given by a lover?
A symbol of promise that
He will come back again and again
Giving comfort and beauty.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Saturday, August 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 10 August 2019

Great imagery and imagination. I have seen double rainbows.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 August 2019

An excellent expression, dear ate Rose....10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 August 2019

A symbol of promise that/He will come back again and again/Giving comfort and beauty.......powerful imagination! A wonderful poem so beautifully penned................10

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Anjandev Roy 11 August 2019

A symbol of promise......great piece. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Celyfer dalire 11 August 2019

What a beautiful poem po :) keep it up

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Sandra Feldman 28 June 2020

What a tenderly beautiful thoughts. Written impeccably. In whose beauty and sweet description, one could certainly and willingly get lost. Very, very attractively, unforgettable. Love it! To my poem list, immediately, can't lose that rainbow.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 February 2020

Beautiful poetic expression on the rainbow. Both stanzas provide excellent imagery 10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

It is amazing how a poet sees things different from what most see. A rainbow like a crown worn, or a ring given by the lover. Beautiful, rains, called megha in Sanskrit can be imagined as the lover sending a special ring for Earth, an eager bride, that he showers with his love.

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Nice environment, feeling pleasant to read.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 August 2019

Excellent poetry. A very astute comparison between true love and rainbow. Simple and beautiful. Loved it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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