A Promise Poem by Dwi utami

A Promise

Rating: 3.1


While i'still opening the eyes*
While my heart was still speaking*
While my hands was still warm*
While my arms were still strong to embrace you*
I'promised on behalf of the love i'will maintained my heart for you*

While the Wind was still filling up space in the earth*
While the sun was still lighted my road*
While the moon was still loyal brilliantly for sky*
While the little stars was still took care of me in the dream*
I'promised i'will plant my love in the heart forevermore*

While the dew was still cold for morning day*
While the floWers was still created honey to butterflies and the honeybee*
While the rain was still descending from sky and was wetting the land*
And while the season continued to change*

I'promised never will to change my heart with the other heart*

Received me in all of your life*
I'promised to continue to live throughout your life*

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 August 2010

‘I'promised on behalf of the love i'will maintained my heart for you*’ ~ Real love does so I'promised i'will plant my love in the heart forevermore* ~ Real love ramifies I'promised never will to change my heart with the other heart* ~ Real love is one directional I'promised to continue to live throughout your life* ~ Real love is ‘One Unit’ Excellent poetry…and it is diamonded love as stars* are smiling after each sentence… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Claudia Krizay 30 July 2011

I LOVE this poem! ! It has a lot of sentiment. keep up the good work!

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Nimal Dunuhinga 13 August 2010

Beautiful but don't break the promise.

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What a lovely devotional love poem. Loved the inter-connection of love and creation. Beautifully penned, from the heart indeed. ; D

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 August 2010

'promised on behalf of the love i'will maintained my heart for you* , , , I shall wait for that to happen.. really nice move and full of promises....10

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Kevin Carney 04 August 2010

A beautifully written piece. I really enjoyed reading this.

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