A Promise Poem by Shaikh Haneef

A Promise

Rating: 4.8


This promise is solid,
And these words I speak are true,
I want you to know I love you,
And will always be there for you.

Life for me has been funny,
Throwing me twists and turns.
Never knowing what to expect,
From around that next curve.

When you came into my life,
That road started to straighten out,
Things became more normal.
And I knew without a doubt.

You were the one for me,
Making my life full of love,
My heart full of joy,
Its like we fit like a glove.

The lucky man I am,
To have found you by chance,
You made everything feel better,
With just your smile and glance.

Thank you for everything,
Helping me find that true road,
Im hoping you will join me,
As lifes treasures unfold.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 28 September 2011

The bomb can sometimes kill any life and the greater bomb is word...this seems like a beautiful flower with hidden bomb...But the bomb have two types, good one or bad one and this is good one..Sealed the promise with good thing and if you show the wrong other than it looks it will explode and it's broken..Nice poem anyway well handed_Unwritten Soul

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Jacqui Broad 07 October 2011

You really do write from the heart, don't you?

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 April 2012

Good rhyming and 'I'm Yours'...Love Poem...nicely woven in words Thanks for sharing Tenner ~ niv

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Johnny Big Balls 19 January 2012

Beautiful poem, I like it alot. I've tried the fits like a glove rhyme and don't like that bit so much. I think you are very talented

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Anhelica Velasquez 19 January 2012

great peom.... nice way to say it.... better poets than i are the ones with a way with words like you, and this poem is proof

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Malini Kadir 04 November 2011

what a wonderful way to request.....lovely young man!

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Minu Alex 10 October 2011

Well I perfectly understand!

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