A Problem With My Heart! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

A Problem With My Heart!

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I have a heart like you
On every sun rise
It soars so high
On wings of imagination
It shines so well
Wherever it flies,
It laughs on its flight.

On every sun set
It falls down to ground
It looses its shine
It cries on its falls
And hides in dark phases of life
May be somewhere beyond horizon.

Well this the only problem with my heart
Otherwise I have well maintained heart.
Smiles!

Geetha Jayakumar.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Tuesday, January 20, 2015
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Rajnish Manga 20 January 2015

A heart full of feelings has its own ups and downs in life like it is with our own dazzling star each morning and evening. Beautiful poem: A couple of lines of yours to quote: On every sun rise / It soars so high / On every sun set / It falls down to ground.

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Kee Thampi 20 January 2015

keep smiles and laugh be courage to fight with love

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Rajesh Thankappan 21 January 2015

A heart which soars and fall is a heart with a bagful of emotion. This rise and fall of our emotion makes us feel that we are human and this in turn make us feel how blessed we are to be one. A beautiful poem that took me too on a heavenly flight on the realms of the sky.

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Rajesh Thankappan 21 January 2015

A heart which soars and fall is a heart with a bagful of emotion. This rise and fall of our emotion makes us feel that we are human and this in turn make us feel how blessed we are to be one. A beautiful poem that took me too on a heavenly flight on the realms of the sky.

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Valsa George 22 January 2015

It is such a cute, little poem describing your heart's flight in excitement and joy and its steep downward descent in grief and disappointment! Such erratic fluctuations are so very natural Geetha. Still if we can maintain an equilibrium, it will be great! Enjoyed much!

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Bharati Nayak 02 May 2015

Wonderfully presented in this poem the rise and fall of emotions, the pleasure and pain of heart in well crafted lines.

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Amitava Sur 29 April 2015

Here you detailed the nature of your buoyant heart with full of emotions. That's why it flies high with sun rise, it laughs and shines but at the same time it cries in darkness apprehending some fright. which I find not a problem but natural Anyway - I wish you.... to fly high with a jubilant smile. Thank you

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Lyn Paul 24 January 2015

Such Wonderful Words Dear Geetha. Love the title, great you have a healthy heart. Love is all around us and will bloom when you least expect it. x

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Akhtar Jawad 23 January 2015

Everyday sun rises with infinite rays of hopes, some of these sun rays are reflected by the moon in night but most of the sun rays are turned in the stars of frustration and twinkle on the sky of life. That's a problem with every heart. Geetha felt it it more than others and the consequence came in the shape of a beautiful poem...............10

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Savita Tyagi 23 January 2015

Such a beautiful poem with heart felt emotions. We rise and fall in our emotions every day from sun set to sun rise. The way you wrote it is simply marvelous.

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