A Prime Moment Poem by akram saqib

A Prime Moment

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the moment when
you saw me in dejection
and asked me, why
are you so sad?
i wondered and looked up
you came closer and
put your palm on my forehead
to wipe out the sweat
i was lightened from all worries and
at once i burried
all my thoughts and sad feelings
the moment i rejoice today
and call it a prime moment of my life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shweta Advani 17 May 2009

beautiful....moments make life so worthwhile: -)

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Bob Blackwell 16 May 2009

Lovely poem about a moment in a life.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 06 May 2009

Sometimes a single moment becomes the most precious memory of the life. Nice little poem to remember such a prime moment. Best Wishes Naseer

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