A Prayer For Son Poem by akram saqib

A Prayer For Son

Rating: 3.5


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Soar higher and higher
On the zenith might not stop
No one might catch your fire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi A 29 April 2009

A nice thought. Only the last line did not fire in me well. What do you actually mean?

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Greenwolfe 1962 13 April 2009

If I am right, this is advice for a son. Quite unique advice also. Not sure I agree, but then, what is the alternative. There would have to be one. Interesting. Again, I like this one verse concept in poetry. Wish I did more of it myself. I just like stories too much. GW62

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