A Prayer Against Pride Poem by Mike Finley

A Prayer Against Pride

Rating: 5.0


You are the winking stream,
We are all hiccup and failure.

You are love, a perfect dream.
We, a stumbling drunkard.

You are faithful like a mighty tree.
We are momentary tinder.

To you belongs the victory,
Our only hope, surrender.



(2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 28 April 2006

Mike, I truly think this is a powerful prayer, . one that I would be proud to pray myself. Thank you for giving it to us.

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Raynette Eitel 28 April 2006

Someone once taught that the way to get power is to give it away. That's why your word, 'surrender, ' is so important in this prayer. Raynette

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Esther Leclerc 28 April 2006

And 'surrender' differs from 'giving up' or 'giving in'. There is strength in this kind. Thanks for this, Mike.

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***** ********* 28 April 2006

I Love it Mike, Pride is such a difficult mountain to climb. Falling down it can be deadly if you haven't got a good grip to start with! lol 10 from flying instead! Tai

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Mike Finley

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Flint, Michigan
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