A Poet's Work Is Never Done Poem by Tom J. Mariani

A Poet's Work Is Never Done

Rating: 4.0


What's keepng me
From writing better poetry
(Beyond not finding a word
That rhymes with orange)

I don't see myself as a poet
No one has granted me a license
I have however somehow
Learned how to wheedle words

Out of my head
Onto a blank page
I'll admit I have had to
Kick them around a bit

After they have landed
Some had to be kicked out
I was sad to see them go
It was like having to fire

Your cousin who just
Wasn't carring his weight
My additional problem is
That whenever I pick up a page

Of even my revised poetry
The words are still moving
Some are embarrased
Asking to be replaced

By better more appropriate ones
Some adamately think that
They should remain
Just as they are

Some are trying to jump
From here
To there
For clarity

So what's holding me back
From better words and arrangements
What's preventing a coup
What's keeping them

From breaking through the lines
And taking over
They know how much work
It was to put them there

They know I am reluctant
To call them back
Without having stronger replacemenets
That's all that's holding me back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 26 July 2008

Poetry can have a life.....all its own....completely....from start....to finish! And...the narrator.......wonders......

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Carol Rhodes 14 February 2008

TOM, YOU NEVER FAIL TO AMAZE. YOU PAINT A BEAUTIFUL EXPLORATORY EMOTIONAL PICTURE. YOUR WORDS FLOW AND CAPTURE IMAGES. NICE. THIS POEM BELIES YOUR SELF-EXAMINATION. JOB WELL DONE.

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To Windward 26 October 2007

Tom It's hard to know when to stop tweaking isn't it? I think you can put the pen down on this one!

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Tom J. Mariani

Tom J. Mariani

San Francisco, CA
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