Richard Lackman

Rookie - 98 Points (Philadelphia)

A Poet's Shame


I set out to write this poem and I had a simple plan.
I'd avoid all things prosaic and I'd do the best I can
To optimize the content and the grammar and the rhyme
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  • Gold Star - 17,460 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/6/2014 1:31:00 AM)

    The poem itself is very hearty and understandable and itself is nice and beautiful from such a great mind who might have several occasions of helplessness of human life. Really expect more, through poems and likes to be an asset to the reader's club. Thank you doctor. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 717 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (5/5/2014 5:38:00 AM)

    Excellently written and so true that poems feel like they are the childrenof poets, some are fine but some we wish weren't ours. This one is so brilliant I wished it was mine. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,417 Points Babatunde Aremu (5/5/2014 3:34:00 AM)

    Well, poems are expressions of inner-self. Whichever way you expressed yourself, it's left for others to judge, no condemnation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 261 Points Adeline Foster (8/16/2013 1:24:00 PM)

    So many Poet's efforts come to mind as I read this that my comments are morphing as I read. Robert Service, A E Housman. And of course some of my own. How about mine - Who am I -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 717 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (9/4/2012 8:58:00 PM)

    Fantastic metaphor of poetry as a child and some are truly terrible for me I wish I could just delet them -but they were part of me somehow. Wonderful, thought -provoking and inspiring write, brilliant form and flow. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 763 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (5/7/2012 12:37:00 AM)

    Hey, Richard, I liked this poem a lot...the problem you have discussed is faced by every poet. I have included this poem in the list of my favorite poems... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Latisha Barker (5/6/2012 7:07:00 PM)

    I really like this poem and can completely relate. I think you are an awesome poet. Sometimes, in other people's poetry, the words go over my head and i don't quite get what they are trying to say. I really like your style, very straightforward and easy to comprehend. (Report) Reply

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