A Poem To Honor St. Valentine Poem by Hugh Cobb

A Poem To Honor St. Valentine

Rating: 4.4


If youth could age's wisdom ken,
& age could know youth's fire again
or age could Old Time's hands turn back
T'would then be youth with time to spend
& wisdom's strengths on which to depend.
This said, t'is never just white or black
For youth doth all discretion lack
& age tho' willing & desirous to play
To youth's vitality must passion give way
& such a conflict therein lies
for age is by youth most oft despised
& youth by age oft seen to whine,
“please, won't you be my valentine? ”

(Copyright 2/12/2006)

(Happy Valentine's to PoemHunter!)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kskdnj sajn 12 February 2006

'Age knows youth's fire' in this write, 't'is never just white or black'. Beautiful yearning, and honor Hugh. I don't like valentines day, but this one slipped passed and warmed my traditional bitter heart. Thanks, Angie

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 13 February 2006

Hey, when young we despise the elders. When old(er) we don't unerstand the young enough to dislike them. I know youth's fire...it just takes me longer to light it! Nice poem, Hugh. L

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Gregory Gunn 13 February 2006

Dear Hugh, Methinks the ghost of Shakespeare was in your general vicinity as you penned the glorious magnum opus. I doth tip my feathered trilby hat to you dear Sir.

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Declan McHenry 16 February 2006

Now this I do appreciate Hugh. A fine work with meaning. I like the touch of craft you apply and the way you've couched the whole message in the language so beloved of those who still pen their own valentine verses.

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Esther Leclerc 18 February 2006

Insightful, true - with the perfect ending. Love it!

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Linda Ori 16 June 2006

When we're young we can't wait to grow up. When we're old, we wish we were young again. Never satisfied, are we? Couldn't we just reach a happy medium and stay there with all the aspects of each extreme intact? Great read. Linda

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Danny Reynolds 21 March 2006

Absolutely marvellous. I don't see Shaky as the muse here, but Rabbie burns through the page. Danny.

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Gina Onyemaechi 04 March 2006

Oh but your skill of style, Hugh! This is a clever and addictive piece of writing, and like all the others have said, I feel Shakespeare himself would have been proud to have written this. And thanks for your comment on 'For This I Ache'. Yep, I'm doing ok, thanks. Squeezing your hand, Gina.

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Linda Hepner 26 February 2006

I do like the antiquated style, very clever and suitable! By the way, it's not just the young who want to be valentined... in fact it's not mainly the young though nobody asked my opinion! Fondly, Linda

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Scarlett Treat 24 February 2006

Age to me is that old saying, 'The spirit is willing but the flesh is weak! ' Inside my head I am still 16, and I 'Know youth's fire again! ' Beautiful thoughts, well put. Scarlett

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