Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 175 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

A poem that put my heart on fire Poem by Vishal Sharma


You make words and they immortal
you are trying to adjust this world in a bottle
and you are penning so beautifully days
i have a little words outnumbering your praise

you are tied in a great white ribbon
i just give a gentle push to free you from this prision,
and make you feel that you are not alone
i too cry darling for someone who is now gone

i think of you even when my mind is in dream
and am making our love shining using fair cream
you write so vividely do you get your talent hire
but listen baby your a poem has put me on fire.

Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/23/2013 12:26:00 PM)

    Very romantic poem bro, liked it.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,741 Points Heather Wilkins (6/22/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    you are tied in a great white ribbon. lovely thought. nice imagery (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,928 Points Hazel Durham (6/17/2013 9:30:00 AM)

    Beautiful with lovely imagery, so romantic! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,521 Points Neela Nath (6/17/2013 7:42:00 AM)

    Beautiful Vishal.Really. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 291 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (6/16/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    Thank you Vishal. A beautiful poem of good sense with rhythm and rhyme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 341 Points Don Nguyen (6/16/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful Vishal, and so sorry for my late coming. Keep it up, your feeling in sensual and full of emotions. Your expression is so true, need more images and colorful metaphors but don't overdo it. One way to do it is using the simple daily things so your reader don't even notice anything usual until they finish your poem. Repeat words with the same meanings to put it on notice on fire. I don't follow any rule, never read a book on poetry or rules of poetry, just read a few poems on this site to realize, yes, I belong here and I can contribute!
    I really don't like to comment on poetry because I think is of poor taste and because I love you all. Every poem except the vulgar or hate I love, all.
    I will be your faithful follower for days or months to come, I don't know for how long my resource runs out. it is a mission right now, but hopefully it is not endless.

    Peace, (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (6/16/2013 11:59:00 AM)

    Because when desire speaks it burn the hearts, heat of fire that never equal...when someone steal you as a lover_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/16/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    nice rhyming verse
    good to read (Report) Reply

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