A Poem That Peeked Within Poem by indira babbellapati

A Poem That Peeked Within

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where do i belong
i seem to ask myself
more often than ever
as i float on the surface
of a yet to be titled world

i attempt to rise
above the familiar and not so familiar
world of your perennial touch
thinly poised on the cycle of birth and death
but only end up as an insubstantial shadow
on the fading life line
at the level crossing
as thousand hands
prepare to undress me
throwing up the ugliness
of the cactus hidden within
between the covers of
this dispassionate musings
that in general parlance
passes off as life

what is there to write poetry on
or paint a colourful picture
on this drab canvass
of cluttering emotions
of laughter and tears
that accommodates everybody's
biography or autobiography?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aranthabailu Ummar 12 September 2011

hi madom, eventhou i am a unfit man to critics ur poem after reading it plays some emotional unbalance as untitled world without knwoing where we to show our courrage. World is not a balance platform for our play for livingness. It emerged from our cast and wealth. If cast the cost to cross all the levels wealth opens all the gates instead of urging to know the height of the personality and and the route of raise. So attempt naturally to come to a familliar world we feel more worst experience than ones throwing ugliness towards us. I think this makes u to think about birth and death. But for me death is more valuabe than the birth. So if one laugh on us that means he dont know where he meet after his death. In this way i admire your words laugh and tear are silence navigator without making any sound it will mirrorise and bring life to peak in either way

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2011

You belong to Tamil Nadu originally as i see the surname from the 'Dhinka Chika' land.Sad that the memory cards of Annas there cannot read your feelings.They want to undress as it is too much hot there and they think you write poetry to serve their coconuta..but tis kinda viruses are everywhere rendering u to live better.. If u carry impatience in ur heart then u r alive If u carry fragrance in ur words then u r alive If u carry dreams in ur eyes then u r alive Learn to live like free waves of the wind Learn to flow like the sea in Tamil Nad does as waves Receive every moment in life with open arms Every moment is a new beginning seeing with ur eyes...

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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