A Poem Of Love And Longing Poem by indira babbellapati

A Poem Of Love And Longing

Rating: 3.1


A thousand moonlights
Bloom within
A thousand infant suns
Caress within
A thousand springs
Shower within
Just at a passing thought
Of you and for you
The moon on your terrace
On your after dinner moon-walk
The delicate sun rays on your skin
At your morning walk
The spring gardens you conceal
Behind a private wall
Are my buddies connecting
You and me in a
Thousand blooming orchards:
One half soaked in
A thousand moonlights
The other stirring
To a thousand infant rays

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 02 December 2009

that is great except the morning walk, I like to sleep at that time. Lovely composition and very tender.10++

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Carol Gall 02 December 2009

beautiful indira lovely poem of love 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 02 December 2009

Very eloquent and soft moving poem indeed. Lovely expression and flow. Good one.

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Ying Escalona 03 December 2009

you never ceased to amaze me...

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Ranjit Ravindran 03 December 2009

Day and night you are showered in love.That's why these loving words flow from you in a never ending stream.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 July 2011

the last four lines cover the whole. shan

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 December 2009

'infant Sun' Liked the expression.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 December 2009

It's not a small poem; it's an unending ecstasy of love and longing. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Patrick A. Martin 05 December 2009

Whenever one walks in love's light or reads Indira Babbellapati's poems the sun shines.---10

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Kesav Easwaran 04 December 2009

nice ending (lines) for your thoughts on love...thanks

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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