Dee Corpolongo

Rookie - 337 Points (09/ 27/64 / New York)

A Place No One Has Known - Poem by Dee Corpolongo


There is a place that only I know of
for it is buried beneath the many tears
A place where love is abundant and real
and beauty surpasses throughout all the years

Where the pains felt are totally absent
and all the misery is far behind left alone
Where this place that we live is so amazing
where the oceans never leave an unturned stone

This place is so far from reality it seems
that it is all just another made up dream
but the beauty of the forest and flowers
seemingly was Natures original scheme.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Someone requested a poem be written about various titles/subjects, and this is what I chose and wrote in the last 5 minutes....short, but from the heart, as always! ! ! !

Comments about A Place No One Has Known by Dee Corpolongo

  • Rookie - 160 Points Tee Daniel (5/5/2014 2:22:00 AM)

    it's a cogent writeup from a deep heart of Love..so stunning. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 30,534 Points Valsa George (12/23/2013 12:22:00 AM)

    A place where love is abundant and real
    and beauty surpasses throughout all the years

    Such a place is so hard to find! Yet, let us all keep within such a dreamy world beneath the surface of a disturbed world, scarce in love and true friendship! A truly lovely write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (12/10/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    this is so visually stunning...I would love to visit this place...nice write.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (8/29/2013 5:49:00 PM)

    that special place is where I retreat to from time to time wish you could go there with me. lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 237 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/9/2013 2:39:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem Dee, I also love the last stanza.
    So true.....
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,305 Points Lyn Paul (6/6/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Love your heart is this.... Dee If only so many could skip the misery. Great write, (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (6/6/2013 4:48:00 AM)

    I think we all know this place for it lives in a dream within us. Sometimes dreams can be taken
    out and played with before we have to put them away. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,395 Points Smoky Hoss (6/5/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful words! I love the last stanza, it is so true, so correct. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,225 Points Valerie Dohren (6/3/2013 1:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful Dee, and all in five minutes - you are so clever. We all need a special place within us, where we can withdraw and contemplate all the beauties of life and nature. Great stuff. And thank you for your recent comments Dee, very much appreciated. xx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013


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