A Place No One Has Known Poem by Dee Corpolongo

A Place No One Has Known

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There is a place that only I know of
for it is buried beneath the many tears
A place where love is abundant and real
and beauty surpasses throughout all the years

Where the pains felt are totally absent
and all the misery is far behind left alone
Where this place that we live is so amazing
where the oceans never leave an unturned stone

This place is so far from reality it seems
that it is all just another made up dream
but the beauty of the forest and flowers
seemingly was Natures original scheme.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Someone requested a poem be written about various titles/subjects, and this is what I chose and wrote in the last 5 minutes....short, but from the heart, as always! ! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 03 June 2013

Beautiful Dee, and all in five minutes - you are so clever. We all need a special place within us, where we can withdraw and contemplate all the beauties of life and nature. Great stuff. And thank you for your recent comments Dee, very much appreciated. xx

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Smoky Hoss 05 June 2013

Wonderful words! I love the last stanza, it is so true, so correct.

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Lyn Paul 01 January 2016

Lovely to read again. We all need that special place. Oh to dream..... Thank You Dee

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Judah Daniel 05 May 2014

it's a cogent writeup from a deep heart of Love..so stunning.

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Heather Wilkins 29 August 2013

that special place is where I retreat to from time to time wish you could go there with me. lovely write

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 09 June 2013

Wonderful poem Dee, I also love the last stanza. So true..... Siya_! !

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Lyn Paul 06 June 2013

Love your heart is this.... Dee If only so many could skip the misery. Great write,

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