A Picasso Morning Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

A Picasso Morning

Rating: 5.0


Pre-dawn on the Caprock
Is a flat, even line of horizon
Appearing out of the night -
A solitary stroke to indicate a mouth.
Slowly earth and sky
Unpurse their lips;
Muscles slacken to reveal
The subtle shades of rose
As the sun approaches its entrance.
Hidden light washes
Away stars with the glisten
That perspires from dreams.
Then a golden bubble
Emerges from that mouth
And floats into the morning.
Unable to be sad for long,
This blue child smiles.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Hansford 23 July 2009

There are few poets on PH who can extend a metaphor so long and so well as Lillian. A lovely example.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 May 2009

'Then a golden bubble Emerges from that mouth And floats into the morning. Unable to be sad for long, This blue child smiles.' O wonderful! You have caught and sketched pre-dawn nicely with noble metaphor! Exciting poem...10 for it with love.

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James Mclain 08 May 2009

It is nice to see another helping hand with ease in paint..iip

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