A Perfect Moon! Poem by Sugar Bear

A Perfect Moon!

Rating: 5.0


I make the tub a prosper
Beautifying it with all I had
Aggravated to take a shower
I’ll take a bubble bath!

For my loving self
I trailed rose petals to the door
And onto the bubbly shelf
I put a little more

I lit myself some candles
To help me relax
And I switched the radio to my favorite channel
So I could hear my tracks, as I laid back

Just then the static
Began to get out of control
So I got out with a panic
To switch to “Silent Mode”

As I went to get back in
I slipped on the wet floor
And the splashidge
Made my lit candles no more

My petals flew
And piled on the walls
And the curtain I grabbed onto
Began to fall

Just then
My mom hears the great big BOOM!
She walks in
To view a great……moon!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaughn Bekker 24 May 2010

ha ha ha, prisless, never saw that one comming, very funny, shock and hooror for your mom, lol, well written: 0)

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Con Nie 20 April 2006

An embarrassing situation put to good use in this funny poem! :) Still smiling. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Danny Reynolds 20 April 2006

Great stuff, and I'm gonna spend all day trying to find a way to use the word 'Splashidge! ' 10 from me Danny

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Veronika Knollman 20 April 2006

That would've been awkward. Good poem. :)

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