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(16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

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A peep into life

Sweet are those days;
Playing with the peer,
Crying for broken toys,
Fighting for mom's lap.

Sweeter are these days;
Struggling hard with books,
Craving for identity,
Taping out of joy.

Sweetest would be those days;
Sharing sweet memories of yours with your spouse,
Experiencing the motherhood, and
Finally waiting for the grandchild.

Submitted: Thursday, June 11, 2009
Edited: Saturday, December 15, 2012


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  • Harindhar Reddy (3/28/2012 12:49:00 PM)

    A age of 24, I see you are matured beyond my thoughts! It's treat to read your poems and I am proud that we to belong to the same part of the country. I hope you carry your talent in similar way to become a top poet. I hope you are here to excel as poet.

    For writing poetry on trivial matters of life in an admirable way, Thumbs up! 10 +++++ for A Calla Lilly!

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/4/2010 12:33:00 AM)

    interesting observation inside..life

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (9/18/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    The three sweet stages are brought in briefly in three stanzas, childhood, student and motherhood. Well done.

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (9/2/2009 10:43:00 AM)

    You set us back to memory lane.A lovely piece Gona.Keep it up.

  • surya . (6/26/2009 2:52:00 AM)

    vow! yesterday, today and tomorrow.well penned. to top it this para is well written
    'Sweetest would be those days;
    Sharing sweet memories of yours with your spouse,
    Experiencing the motherhood, and
    Finally waiting for the grandchild.'
    posted10
    surya

  • Joseph Poewhit (6/11/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    Those are sweet thoughts and memories.

  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/11/2009 5:41:00 AM)

    realistic and optimistic...............

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (6/11/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    Queeny you already got into the mould and able to express your thoughts freely and beautifully. Very well written poem. Heart-warming.

  • C. P. Sharma (6/11/2009 4:15:00 AM)

    A joyous peep expressed with ease and flow. Enjoyed it.
    CP

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