A Peaceful United World Poem by Kavitha Krishnamurthy

A Peaceful United World

Rating: 3.5


Drops of blood scattered everywhere
When would we be liberated from this nightmare?
If you have sympathy and you do care
Then pray for peace and put in your share

Deadly weapons, perilous missiles and lethal gun
Miserable cries, pathetic corpses and suffering human
It is a serious matter, Please do not shun
What's the point if by such means a battle is won?

Brotherhood is vanishing, act before it is too late
Join hands with me and try to win the fate
Eradicate the evil and throw away the hate
Make a peaceful united world and be each other's mate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 January 2009

lovely thought...read my 'just human' 10

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Prasanna Kumari 27 December 2006

powerful poem with smooth flow of words...let us think that pen is mightier than the sword....and this will help to fill the mind with love and peace...

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Jessie Li 06 December 2006

I agree with Raghavan Warrier

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Raghavan Warrier 24 November 2006

The message is great. 'Join hands with me and try to win the fate' I hope you will find at least a few willing to do so. World is too selfish to care for others.

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