A Peaceful Place Poem by Tyler Anhorn

A Peaceful Place

Rating: 4.8


As I stare at the moon.
I listen to the wave beat against the rock
The wind going threw the tree.
I find myself sitting in a peaceful place.
A peaceful world.
As I drift of into my sleep
I think of how this world would be without war.
Without violance.
Without evil.
As I dream
I dream about this world of what it could be.
This world I wish to be.
As I wake up.
I wish it was night again.
So i could stare at the moon.
And be peaceful once again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 16 April 2012

That is right, Tyler, this is a dream everybody dreams of! A very creative work that clearly shows your writing skills and talent! This amazing write has become your stepping stone that will lead you one day to the top of the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! The World is starving and want more food for thought like yours! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Tina Mack 01 August 2011

I think this really captures how most people feel. We all want to be in that peaceful place. Again, kudos to you. Good Job!

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