A Path’s Logic Poem by jathin aka jesuzz

A Path’s Logic

Rating: 2.2


As I walk the path,
I see its ahead of me,
It is also behind me.
I have seen it now.
Yet long before you were there
Was it my blindness
Or my failure to notice.

Dear path are you sad?
Have you awaited my footprints
If so then why do you riddle it with stones an thorns
Your sides are clothed, grass green and blossomed
Still you choose to be nude

You bear the child of your last conqueror
Are they your scars
Or do you cherish them as souvenirs
My feet hurt less and less as I walk
Is it your lovely caressing?

Once I was new to you
Am I know yours to cradle?
My feet’s gashes, on you leave a red trail
Does this blood we share make us family
I have conquered the path I walked
Does it make you my master
Am I waking towards my goal
Or am I choosing the way you lead me

Maybe I am the searcher
But my dear I am also the search
Yet I myself am also the query
Maybe I am just yours
Maybe I am you







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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 04 April 2009

nice poem a soul searching one -10 anjali

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Has the PATH lead you to the CLARITY of the WAY AHEAD........! ? ! WonderFULL thoughts and ideas are IMAGED in this verse. Kudos :) -shree

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Vyshak Aka Y_shag? 05 April 2009

absolution is yours my brother....respects..........

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Nimal Dunuhinga 11 April 2009

Indeed it's logical Jathin.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 April 2009

yea path...........pathwalker and the goal are one..............Good Write..........

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Alex Gomez 05 April 2009

Wow, what a conundrum to understand initially. But as I rescanned the text, I realized the depth of your words and the complexity of the path. Very brilliantly designed poem.

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Desiree Burdick 05 April 2009

wow what a deep path your walking in i like the poem though

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 05 April 2009

Very cleverly penned, yes a path goes ahead and we leave it behind and what we do along this path...time will tell? Cindy

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