* A Part Of It We All Are Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* A Part Of It We All Are

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I have a music to play
I have a song to sing
I have a smile to give
I have a life to live

A part of this
grand orchaestration iam
a part of this
lovely poetry iam

A part of it we all are
each and every one of us
what 'SIGNIFICANCE' is your part
kills it all
a 'PART' is a part.... and
that is all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 18 May 2009

A part for the whole is well explained in the poem

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Indira Babbellapati 18 May 2009

yes, we are a part of this whole!

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Ency Bearis 18 May 2009

well written poem...nice

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Ravi A 18 May 2009

Actually speaking, we are not part of it but the whole of it. 'Poornal poornamudachyade...' Let us not forget this idea. We may be reflecting only a part of it as influenced by our individual nature but it is WHOLE deep within. It is only the problem of the reflecting mirror and not the treasure that we carry. If you see the works of our great Rishis, you can see that they are WHOLE in their contents and presentation of ideas. One Vyasa is enough to represent the entire clan of Poets of all times. This is the truth.

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Lee Crowell 18 May 2009

Samanyan I love this topic of synergy for a poem. I would someday attempt one myself but I don't know if there is anything left to be said after your nice write here. The only idea in this I don't understand is the 'killing'. If one of the parts seeks significance, can this really kill the whole entity?

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 May 2009

a clever treatment of words. Amazing and amusing.

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Reshma Ramesh 31 May 2009

good words of wisdom.............well penned

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Indira Renganathan 30 May 2009

You significantly stand out.....great thinking

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Smiley Hooker 28 May 2009

I can hear your music playing. beautiful! thanks for sharing.: -)

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Raj Arumugam 26 May 2009

a delightful lyric touched by beauty and grace

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