A Paradigm Shift Poem by Abha Sharma

A Paradigm Shift

Rating: 3.9


Driving straight is fun
But careful dive along bow bends,
Trivial anticlimactic stances
Breed carking differences

World cascades in future
The young grows up in age
Doesn’t have to wait too long
Dichotomy picked up with a tong

Eccentric eclectic wits
Insinuate egotistical thoughts
Myopia bothers any swap
Slipup in a surly wrap

Angst-ridden fronts
Denigrate each other
Words, attitude, feeling, love
Transcend the paradigm.

So surreal an avant garde

The deluge will carry us all…
Towards many paradigm shift

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Cornish 23 April 2008

Oh this is superb! Fantastic use of language.... every line gave me more! Loved: 'Driving straight is fun But careful dive along bow bends, Trivial anticlimactic stances Breed carking differences' 'Carking' how wonderful! Rx

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Dichotomy picked up with a tong Very winding and melodious composition Rehan

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 April 2008

this is a gorgeous piece..............i'm seduced already..........

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 April 2008

do we need a paradigm ab initio..i think not...but this is transient too, i dont know wat i wil think tomorrow

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 25 April 2008

Hello poet and I enjoyed your peom, great work! Come and visit my poems when you can, LC Taylor

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Roland Bastien 23 August 2008

The deluge will carry us all… Towards many paradigm shift -------------- I do feel your image and its linguistic approach

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Indira Renganathan 05 August 2008

Anguish lines splendidly written.Good subject.Thanks for sharing

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Egi David Perdana 21 May 2008

the paradigma it's style art of wonderful life

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Andrew Blakemore 20 May 2008

Another deep and meaningful piece of work Abha. Well done. Andrew

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

Profound, yes, but lucidly put across, with the controlled vocabulary, and some good imagery!

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