Driving straight is fun
But careful dive along bow bends,
Trivial anticlimactic stances
Breed carking differences
World cascades in future
The young grows up in age
Doesn’t have to wait too long
Dichotomy picked up with a tong
Eccentric eclectic wits
Insinuate egotistical thoughts
Myopia bothers any swap
Slipup in a surly wrap
Angst-ridden fronts
Denigrate each other
Words, attitude, feeling, love
Transcend the paradigm.
So surreal an avant garde
The deluge will carry us all…
Towards many paradigm shift
Dichotomy picked up with a tong Very winding and melodious composition Rehan
this is a gorgeous piece..............i'm seduced already..........
do we need a paradigm ab initio..i think not...but this is transient too, i dont know wat i wil think tomorrow
Hello poet and I enjoyed your peom, great work! Come and visit my poems when you can, LC Taylor
The deluge will carry us all… Towards many paradigm shift -------------- I do feel your image and its linguistic approach
Anguish lines splendidly written.Good subject.Thanks for sharing
Another deep and meaningful piece of work Abha. Well done. Andrew
Profound, yes, but lucidly put across, with the controlled vocabulary, and some good imagery!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh this is superb! Fantastic use of language.... every line gave me more! Loved: 'Driving straight is fun But careful dive along bow bends, Trivial anticlimactic stances Breed carking differences' 'Carking' how wonderful! Rx