A Painful Ending Poem by lalitha iyer

A Painful Ending

Rating: 4.8


Every story ends
when it ends
it pains

every mind
stained
truths pincer
fact pinches

many a throb
is missed
to meet
the dearest
to the heart

many a tear
is shed
in memory
of fond ones
felled by years

ending is the goal
or is it the starting
death stands for sure
once the race is on
the competition is hot
racers seldom realise
that finishing is really the finishing

all the labour is lost
for nothing,
or is it for something
when life ends, your race ends.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 01 June 2010

sad lines but smooth and so poetry delivers some relief....

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Eyan Desir 03 August 2009

Goood write..........................

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Siddharth Singh 21 July 2009

wow! very true, every end gives birth to a new beginning.

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Rakesh Bedi 20 July 2009

Every story ends When it ends it Pains.... What a thought, lalitha, brilliant! ! !

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Indira Babbellapati 20 July 2009

the world exists as long as we exist...this world is born with us and fades away with us...

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