A Night With Aphrodite's Breeze Poem by hosny Soliman

A Night With Aphrodite's Breeze



A cold breeze crept to my window
Over my windowpane dropping its tears
With some begging words i can see her cry
Saying: let me in, I'm not a breeze
I'm the Goddess of love and beauty of Greeks
Lo, Aphrodite! ! ! Come in please
Through a narrow slot in my window
Under my blanket where she laid
Come lay beside me
How can you still be a breeze?
Beauty and love are not easy to see.
Beauty and love you can only feel.
Use the eyes of heart so you can see me and feel.
Both under the blanket
Please, teach me, please.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 21 November 2011

Soft and gentle as it breathing on skin you write it so nice...I like the feel of the poem, it surfacing my feeling with peace words...Hosny, i can see how you learn to pick the subject very well here..it's in your imagination..Very nice writing, like it with smile :) _Unwritten Soul

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