Ben Paynter

(Midwest)

a night spent unalone


leave me to my silence
and I will leave you to your laugh
leave me to my darkness
and I will leave you to your past
or let the silence take you
and let me share your smile
while the darkness is around us
if only for awhile.

Submitted: Wednesday, September 27, 2006
Edited: Saturday, September 25, 2010

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  • Evaughn Gray (6/8/2007 7:41:00 PM)

    wow that shares wat i feel inside that noone cares not even a little....great masterpices.... (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (10/14/2006 11:29:00 PM)

    I've always believed 'good things come in small packages' and that holds true here. An excellent write.--Thankyou--Melvina-- (Report) Reply

  • Steffi Webster (10/11/2006 8:01:00 AM)

    A very touching poem Ben I really liked this one. Short and concise it still managed to convey a great emotion in it. Keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Sarah Capella Smith (10/2/2006 6:25:00 PM)

    Awww this is a lovely poem ~ it seems you to can capture alot in just a few sentences too! =) I love the mention of 'silence' and 'darkness' ~ are you a fan of Sylvia Plath?

    ~x~Sarah~x~ (Report) Reply

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