' A Night So Old..................' Poem by fawzia zie

' A Night So Old..................'

Rating: 3.1


A night so old.............

Lying in the darkest night
thoughts of you come into sight
It's so quiet without a sound
the night seems tired without you around
My whisper tries to find the wind
hoping it will reach your hearing
As again I call your name
the weaken voice is all in pain
Watching the stars with eyes that weep
while counting the tears in a try for sleep
A broken dream with heartfelt pain
where no words that can explain
Tell me how to say goodbye
to a night so old that never dies


(april 2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hebert Logerie Sr. 07 October 2009

Very profound and romantic.

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Zeinab Sherif 15 August 2009

a very amazing poem calm & deep.10+++

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Gary Witt 26 July 2009

This is quite nice. The last line in particular is quite striking. Thank you for posting this. -G

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