A New Story Poem by Ana Z. M.

A New Story

Rating: 3.4


It's like I have been awakened
It's like if I build a new castle,
I am taking a new risk,
I am taking a new chance.

Everywhere I am looking at
I can feel sorrounded by your love,
and now I'm addicted to your voice,
I am addicted to your touch..

And now I am breaking every rule,
and now I am flying more,
I am a new bird in the sky,
I am a new life in a heart.

You are everything I need and more,
with you I feel completely safe,
this is the end of a story,
and the beggining of a new one....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 18 April 2010

This work is as if a well kept diary, smooth flowing lines in narrative form. Very passionate!

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C. P. Sharma 29 May 2009

Sweet and flowing. Penned with passion. CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Lovely lucid love verse 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 25 May 2009

A new chapter in the books of life...commencing with sweet soft lines on solid confident page...congrats, Ana...liked the brightness in side your write...10

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Angel Jimenez 22 May 2009

so deep so cute. sweet poem! 10+

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