A New Face Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
A New Face
a lovely new life
a lovely new beginning
a lovely new flower
a lovely new face there
no trace of sadness there
every new morn..
without a trace of any old mourn
a lovely new life...
i want it to be mine effortlessly
iam truely exhausted..
with the relations around
there is realy no bond
iam realy disgusted
with everybody's disguise
they realy don't have a face
there s a comparison between old and new..a new face means a new identity, new personality.....i like the flow of the description of your work...it is very beautiful...realistic it is...the context compliments the title...the whole poem is very excellent....cheers to the next invitation saman.. naizz
A fascinating mixture of idealism and realism.Excellent work. Warm regards, Sandra
a very nice rhyme, words are greatly penned.Thanks for sharing
The word personality is derived from word persona(means mask) . I think we all wear mask.................. Good write......
Day to day life's inevitable dejections..........pains, ennui of hackneyed life.....very well written
I like the thought behind this poem, well written by you 10 Lynda xx
life sometimes could be boring and exasperating. We get on every morning with our wishes for a better day.
an interesting write..circular in nature...realism and fantasy..so well merged
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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expressive write, meeting of a stranger is lovely though a stranger in disguised, nay! ? ...Lovely poem....10+++