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Danielle Elsworth

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A New Beginning


So as days went on, things only got worse. We started off as a good and solemn couple and turned to disaster, we fought, we cried. you were over possive, did you see it? Did you know i cried every night that we fought. When you said i didnt care did you know my heart shattered with every ounce if my body i tried to compose myself but it didnt help, i cried silent tears but you never knew, if i would've said something would you have cared? You tried to think for me, your tried to make MY decisions for me. Why were you being so controlling of me? I am a free spirit and when you try to tame a free spirit it only comes out in disaster. We werent what we once were, we changed for the better, you are no longer the free spirit you once were, you changed into a jealous man and when you get to be a jealous man well your relationship goes down from there and continues from there.

Submitted: Thursday, February 02, 2012
Edited: Friday, February 03, 2012

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  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (2/5/2012 7:41:00 PM)

    A very deep heart touching write that clearly shows your talent and sensitivity! I really admire your ways of freely expressing your inner-feelings! 10+++ Love it! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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