hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 97,767 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Never Ending - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Life is never ending process
It has no pause or recess
It beats on in different form
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Comments about A Never Ending by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 50,309 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/23/2014 9:56:00 PM)

    Life seems to me as no problem at all
    I take it as challenge and useful call
    What is use of crying over split milk?
    When there is no water even to drink
    A well deserved poem of the day, congratulations, A lovely isometric view of life has been painted with beautiful colors. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 318 Points Crystal Rosser (9/23/2014 12:22:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading this poem. It has a wonderful message. Nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,125 Points Amitava Sur (9/23/2014 6:10:00 AM)

    congratulations - for your lovely poem being chosen as the member poem. This is beautiful poem in deed about the human life and it's passage. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,986 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (9/23/2014 4:07:00 AM)

    It is a nice poem with an excellent message. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Liliana ~el (9/23/2013 5:22:00 PM)

    Totally words to live by! ! ! ! ! ~true. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Babatunde Aremu (9/23/2013 10:47:00 AM)

    You always write from life experiences. Your poems are easy to relate with. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mohammad Tabatabaei (9/23/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    Excellent in form and content both.Well-rhymed and beautifully rhythmical. Clear, simple and understanable. I liked it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,727 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/23/2013 7:05:00 AM)

    congratulations and I enjoyed reading this lovely poem about life and the livings.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (9/23/2013 5:01:00 AM)

    Well written, your sentiments are shared the world over. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,647 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (9/23/2013 4:41:00 AM)

    Congrats on having this poem as poem of the day...This poem has a very positive message but it seems to just ramble on and on...it would sound so much better if it could be constructed in a more orderly manner...but this is just a personal opinion which I hope would be taken positively... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kumar Parashar (3/25/2012 4:42:00 PM)

    amazing.....that is all can say.................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (7/29/2011 9:19:00 PM)

    life begins anew each time we open our eyes... lives on in the moments shared, small things given, a hand, an ear that listens, a heart that cares... very good poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Ntsikoe Likiki (7/15/2011 2:27:00 PM)

    Wise words indeed. This should one of the high ranking poems. Beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 165 Points Romeo Della Valle (7/13/2011 9:55:00 PM)

    A very, very positive and uplifting poem that embraces The essence of reality! In life, there are those who choose to travel through thorny paths and time will prove them wrong when there is not left to go back to the past for amendments! This is only one life to live and the rest remain a sad illusion! A very well penned and poignant poerm110+++ Keep inspiring the World my fellow poet! Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (5/11/2011 2:53:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Opens up many facts of life and experience before us. Full of wisdom and strength. Friend, thanks for sharing it.Marks 10 Rekhamandagere (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Oyelakin Gbolahan (9/21/2010 6:08:00 AM)

    i enjoyed your rhythmical verses....process, recess...form, reform...long, wrong...sweet, greet, meet, feet....journey, honey, money, funny....length, strength...hurdles, bundles...
    great one sir...keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kunwar Patel (9/1/2010 7:36:00 AM)

    It beats on in different form
    Constant changes with very good reform (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Earl Clark (8/29/2010 8:33:00 PM)

    You are sharing treasure by your writing, thank you again. You seem to want to share kindness always, we should be gratefull. I believe poets live forever, its not just a cliche. Transcending thought will help your spirit to escape the physical, materialism never brings happiness only bitterness. I can say in a moment you can be gone but your words will be read a million times. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,669 Points Elena Sandu (7/18/2010 3:37:00 AM)

    'I wish I have some treasure to share
    I searched all over but found no where'
    Well, sir, I can see your treasure
    It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice
    if you dont mind
    Your poems, I can't measure
    nor explain how good it feels
    to have a bit of share.
    Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dwi Utami (7/11/2010 8:56:00 PM)

    hey friend i.tink you have wrong tink, about this poem.LIFE NEVER ENDING, in the world not eternely just temporary, i.tink life ending if some poeple died, but your poem realy great, God luck. (Report) Reply

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