A Never Ending Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Never Ending

Rating: 4.3


Life is never ending process
It has no pause or recess
It beats on in different form
Constant changes with very good reform

We have come to stay for short but for a long
Nothing to gain but committing wrong
Find no time for looking back and sum up
It is too late to think and stop

Who makes your life memorable and sweet?
Lovely friends when they come and greet?
Call on you and occasionally meet?
You surge ahead with energy in feet

Endless drive and non stop journey
Sometimes bitterness and sometimes honey
No mad race for treasure or money
Even though it looks sometimes funny

I wish to enjoy it at full length
Though I may not have enough strength
Is it not the strange wish for oasis water?
After all what do we search after?

I may have come across many hurdles
Worries too might have come in bundles
It is all over by the grace of God
How should I express it in words?

I must venture in no man’s land
Sometimes I may find very good friends
I wish I have some treasure to share
I searched all over but found no where

Life seems to me as no problem at all
I take it as challenge and useful call
What is use of crying over split milk?
When there is no water even to drink

It can be made worthwhile by staying positive
No place for thinking destructive or negative
It has to be accepted as destiny or fate
Life is still worthwhile even if we start late

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jasbir Chatterjee 23 September 2013

Congrats on having this poem as poem of the day...This poem has a very positive message but it seems to just ramble on and on...it would sound so much better if it could be constructed in a more orderly manner...but this is just a personal opinion which I hope would be taken positively...

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Mark Dillon 23 September 2013

Well written, your sentiments are shared the world over.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 September 2013

congratulations and I enjoyed reading this lovely poem about life and the livings..

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Mohammad Tabatabaei 23 September 2013

Excellent in form and content both.Well-rhymed and beautifully rhythmical. Clear, simple and understanable. I liked it very much.

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Babatunde Aremu 23 September 2013

You always write from life experiences. Your poems are easy to relate with. Thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2014

Life seems to me as no problem at all I take it as challenge and useful call What is use of crying over split milk? When there is no water even to drink A well deserved poem of the day, congratulations, A lovely isometric view of life has been painted with beautiful colors.

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Crystal Rosser 23 September 2014

I enjoyed reading this poem. It has a wonderful message. Nicely done.

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Amitava Sur 23 September 2014

congratulations - for your lovely poem being chosen as the member poem. This is beautiful poem in deed about the human life and it's passage. Thanks for sharing

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 23 September 2014

It is a nice poem with an excellent message.

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Liliana ~el 23 September 2013

Totally words to live by! ! ! ! ! ~true.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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