Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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A Never Ending


Life is never ending process
It has no pause or recess
It beats on in different form
Constant changes with very good reform

We have come to stay for short but for a long
Nothing to gain but committing wrong
Find no time for looking back and sum up
It is too late to think and stop

Who makes your life memorable and sweet?
Lovely friends when they come and greet?
Call on you and occasionally meet?
You surge ahead with energy in feet

Endless drive and non stop journey
Sometimes bitterness and sometimes honey
No mad race for treasure or money
Even though it looks sometimes funny

I wish to enjoy it at full length
Though I may not have enough strength
Is it not the strange wish for oasis water?
After all what do we search after?

I may have come across many hurdles
Worries too might have come in bundles
It is all over by the grace of God
How should I express it in words?

I must venture in no man’s land
Sometimes I may find very good friends
I wish I have some treasure to share
I searched all over but found no where

Life seems to me as no problem at all
I take it as challenge and useful call
What is use of crying over split milk?
When there is no water even to drink

It can be made worthwhile by staying positive
No place for thinking destructive or negative
It has to be accepted as destiny or fate
Life is still worthwhile even if we start late

Submitted: Wednesday, March 17, 2010
Edited: Thursday, July 14, 2011

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  • Babatunde Aremu (9/23/2013 10:47:00 AM)

    You always write from life experiences. Your poems are easy to relate with. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Tabatabaei (9/23/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    Excellent in form and content both.Well-rhymed and beautifully rhythmical. Clear, simple and understanable. I liked it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (9/23/2013 4:41:00 AM)

    Congrats on having this poem as poem of the day...This poem has a very positive message but it seems to just ramble on and on...it would sound so much better if it could be constructed in a more orderly manner...but this is just a personal opinion which I hope would be taken positively... (Report) Reply

  • Eric Cockrell (7/29/2011 9:19:00 PM)

    life begins anew each time we open our eyes... lives on in the moments shared, small things given, a hand, an ear that listens, a heart that cares... very good poem! (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (7/13/2011 9:55:00 PM)

    A very, very positive and uplifting poem that embraces The essence of reality! In life, there are those who choose to travel through thorny paths and time will prove them wrong when there is not left to go back to the past for amendments! This is only one life to live and the rest remain a sad illusion! A very well penned and poignant poerm110+++ Keep inspiring the World my fellow poet! Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (5/11/2011 2:53:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Opens up many facts of life and experience before us. Full of wisdom and strength. Friend, thanks for sharing it.Marks 10 Rekhamandagere (Report) Reply

  • Oyelakin Gbolahan (9/21/2010 6:08:00 AM)

    i enjoyed your rhythmical verses....process, recess...form, reform...long, wrong...sweet, greet, meet, feet....journey, honey, money, funny....length, strength...hurdles, bundles...
    great one sir...keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Earl Clark (8/29/2010 8:33:00 PM)

    You are sharing treasure by your writing, thank you again. You seem to want to share kindness always, we should be gratefull. I believe poets live forever, its not just a cliche. Transcending thought will help your spirit to escape the physical, materialism never brings happiness only bitterness. I can say in a moment you can be gone but your words will be read a million times. (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (7/18/2010 3:37:00 AM)

    'I wish I have some treasure to share
    I searched all over but found no where'
    Well, sir, I can see your treasure
    It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice
    if you dont mind
    Your poems, I can't measure
    nor explain how good it feels
    to have a bit of share.
    Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Dwi Utami (7/11/2010 8:56:00 PM)

    hey friend i.tink you have wrong tink, about this poem.LIFE NEVER ENDING, in the world not eternely just temporary, i.tink life ending if some poeple died, but your poem realy great, God luck. (Report) Reply

  • Chand Shikari (7/11/2010 5:38:00 AM)

    ife is never ending process
    It has no pause or recess
    It beats on in different form


    rightly said so...10 (Report) Reply

  • Chand Shikari (7/11/2010 5:33:00 AM)

    Life is never ending process
    It has no pause or recess
    It beats on in different form..it is puzzle n never ending...10 (Report) Reply

  • Bose Perumal (7/8/2010 11:35:00 AM)

    Life is a puzzle and always a novelty which is the very essence and thus it is unique. once when yama questioned Yudhistra(Dharma) in Mahabharatha,
    Which is the most strange thing in this universe? for which he answered, it is none other than man himself. why? He could have answered, it is God or the universe itself. he didnt venture into the unknown. But the imminent and the known man is too complicated and mysterious to understand. Right from birth he knows he is being trailed by the shadow of death! But even then he is so mightily blatant and believes himself to be eternal and all powerful and his insane selfishness goes even to the extent of wrecking other lives and the whole world itself. That too for no concrete reason than his own flimsy and ficle self esteem and pride. Is it not the most strange thing? I believe that life is a mystery and how we can make it a history? only by understanding life in the right spirit. see! How nonchalant and abrasive is mankind even in the face of total annihilation that threats and looms in the form of 'Global Warming'. Man doesnt understand rightly unless he can find the right way and solution to erase all misery and problems.

    Please kindly go through my poems and fend me a feedback.

    yours lovingly
    P.Bose 07/07/2010 (Report) Reply

  • Mary Joy Lumanog (5/12/2010 5:26:00 PM)

    It is indeed..despite trials and uncertainties we need to think positive in everything we do...Say I Do..and no one could stop you...it's a journey but it's a wonderful story to tell... this humorous, funny not sad precious life we have.. LIFE and LOVE (Report) Reply

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