Udiah (witness to Yah)

Rookie - 7 Points (1959 / USA)

A Neat Comet - Poem by Udiah (witness to Yah)

A comet came with a large metal core
Racing ‘cross the heavens toward the sun it tore
It started to shed its frozen surface
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Comments about A Neat Comet by Udiah (witness to Yah)

  • Gold Star - 29,399 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (4/18/2014 4:07:00 AM)

    a very good poem pertaining to the comet which is nature's wonderful scenery when it arrives and comes to our sight. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Awa Bah (4/9/2014 1:06:00 PM)

    ths poem is neat just as the tittle (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 659 Points V P Mahur (3/11/2014 4:05:00 PM)

    Dear udiah
    the creation and destruction is the law of Nature. I like your way of expression.

    'Swing of Spring'
    The soft swing of fresh air
    Has brought joyous glare
    Moist with drenching love
    Engaged in the idol affair
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    I want to share this poem with you.
    full of it you can find on my page. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (12/13/2013 8:53:00 PM)

    this is a neat poem....comet's are very interesting... (Report) Reply








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