A Neat Comet (Nature Nature Nature Nature) Poem by Udiah (witness to Yah)

A Neat Comet (Nature Nature Nature Nature)

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A comet came with a large metal core
Racing ‘cross the heavens toward the sun it tore
It started to shed its frozen surface
Of gasses, vapors, and minerals it bore

A collection of time from deep out in space
Now littered its trail with cosmic waste
But as its course closed in too near
It parted the flux of the Heliosphere

Then out of the Sun's plasmatic sea
Leaped an enormous flare
That swiped the hare
A giant shock wave
From the forces that be

Gravity, centrifugal, and a nuclear blast
Sent the fuel supplier again on the chase
Back out to the heavens on a new pace
Flinging it further out into space
On a much longer run which might be its last























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Friday, September 27, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,science
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a very good poem pertaining to the comet which is nature's wonderful scenery when it arrives and comes to our sight.

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Awa Bah 09 April 2014

ths poem is neat just as the tittle

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V P Mahur 11 March 2014

Dear udiah the creation and destruction is the law of Nature. I like your way of expression. 'Swing of Spring' The soft swing of fresh air Has brought joyous glare Moist with drenching love Engaged in the idol affair ............................ ...................... I want to share this poem with you. full of it you can find on my page.

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