A Neat Comet Poem by Bhanu Choudhrie

A Neat Comet

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A comet came with a large metal core
Racing ‘cross the heavens toward the sun it tore
It started to shed its frozen surface
Of gasses, vapors, and minerals it bore

A collection of time from deep out in space
Now littered its trail with cosmic waste
But as its course closed in too near
It parted the flux of the Heliosphere

Then out of the Sun’s plasmatic sea
Leaped an enormous flare
That swiped the hare
A giant shock wave
From the forces that be

Gravity, centrifugal, and a nuclear blast
Sent the fuel supplier again on the chase
Back out to the heavens on a new pace
Flinging it further out into space
On a much longer run which might be its last

Thursday, April 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 24 April 2014

good writing, thanks, I like it.

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