A Muse For Me Poem by Double A P SS

A Muse For Me

Rating: 5.0


My poetry doesn’t rhyme or flow
My poetry has no meaning and no feeling
My poetry has sex and violence written into it
My poetry cares for no one
My poetry is lost without you in it
Save me from my angry thoughts and schemes
I don’t want to be lost in a void where all write is uninspired
Become a muse for me, my poetry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelvin Owusu 27 February 2013

i love this piece nicely written, feelings expressed good work

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Romeo Della Valle 27 June 2011

You are right my friend you use a very strong language to express your hurt-feelings but let me tell you that where you are right now, I was many times before and thank God I found the strength to survive and move on. I identify with your poem strongly but in a different way, please check my poems titled: A LOST LOVE and IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Double A P SS

Double A P SS

Los Angeles, California
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