# A Mother's Chide Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Mother's Chide

Rating: 4.4


[INSPIRED POEM AFTER READING POET CATRINA HEARTS
CAUSE AND EFFECT]

where did the beauty go
oh mother
in thy face
to the poet in me
it was a solace

what is this wrath you show
oh mother
in your face
to the tiny man in me
it was a scare

mother nature
inspires
surprises..and
scars me too

IS IT A MOTHER'S CHIDE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 03 October 2009

wow what a dramatic monologue dear........talking to mother nature! I can feel your words uttering on the wind! ! !

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rago rago 04 October 2009

It`s beautiful to get scared................

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Pandian Angelina 04 October 2009

A mother chides for the well being of her children and warns for their safety. If only we listen to her....how well would this life become. Angel

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Ramesh T A 04 October 2009

Mother Nature does everything based on cause and effect!

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Carol Gall 04 October 2009

a very nice write 10

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Ankur Ankur 14 October 2009

great thought you are good 10

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 14 October 2009

Your magic with words is simply spellbinding....this is an outstanding poem.

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Mamta Agarwal 12 October 2009

mother's chide is good for the child. your poem expresses a child's bewilderment so well. Mamta

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Vijay Menon 09 October 2009

a touching poem indeed 10++

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Ency Bearis 07 October 2009

wonderful thoughts...brilliant write....10

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