A Mother's Call Poem by Savita Tyagi

A Mother's Call



You are my first thought of the day
When eye lids open
I see you behind those lids
And send a prayer for your welfare.

Distances are crossed
The day becomes blissful
When offsprings appear
In dream for added joy.


9.10.2016

Saturday, September 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,relationship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note: As Soon as I woke up this morning my youngest son came to mind as my first thought of the day prompting me to write these few lines. Later this afternoon I took a nap and just before waking up a clear vision of one of my son wearing a white attire was in front of me. So clear and distinct that I pinched my self to know if it is a dream or a reality! If I am awake or still asleep! Oh! The love bond between mother and children envelops us with such a joyous feeling! Some time so unexpected and mysterious but always so precious and comforting.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 23 December 2017

A sublime tribute to mother A lovely little piece of poetry Thanks for sharing dear madam

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Valsa George 12 September 2016

Yes, Savita...! The bond between a mother and her children is something so divine! These four lines contain a warmth which perhaps forty lines cannot hold!

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Savita Tyagi 12 September 2016

Thank you so much Valsa.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 September 2016

That is what mother is, always considering welfare of children. Children sure think of mothers like that but may not express it always.

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Savita Tyagi 12 September 2016

Thanks Tirupathi Ji for your comment.

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