Beach Leanbh

Rookie - 0 Points (07/22/1982)

A Mortal Masterpiece


She sits before me, an infallible piece
A masterwork of bone, sinew, and skin
Defying perfection her fairest cheeks and feminine chin
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  • Gold Star - 12,005 Points Rajnish Manga (11/24/2014 9:50:00 AM)

    Great poem. You have treated a mortal masterpiece as a valuable personal possession initially. But thanks to the metamorphosis, you have decided to liberate the masterpiece for the collective aesthetic bliss of the world. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,842 Points Babatunde Aremu (11/24/2014 8:47:00 AM)

    Nice write! This is a masterpiece. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/24/2014 1:03:00 AM)

    beautifully praised beauty- and congrats being placed poem for the day thank you (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 962 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (11/24/2013 11:37:00 PM)

    congrats on being poem of the day! everything is a masterpiece here, the poem, the subject of the poem, and the manner in which it is written.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 866 Points Liliana ~el (11/24/2013 11:57:00 AM)

    Like this
    Open-minded for the greater good (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 816 Points Leslie Philibert (11/24/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    Like this. Lo is a bit fussy, and why capitalise Winged Victory? , but a solid piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Onwuasoanya Fcc Jones (7/3/2011 12:39:00 PM)

    A master class of poetry. Beautifully coined lines. A picture in words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Priya Thamanna (7/1/2011 9:42:00 AM)

    asthetic poetry...gorgeous description of the dame... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Allen Henriette (4/11/2011 1:48:00 AM)

    That is just awesome.Five stars rating. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Whaylhee Jay (3/21/2011 5:38:00 AM)

    Defining a beauty with a masterpiece. It doesnt get better than this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Inock Chikombingo (1/13/2011 8:20:00 PM)

    he defines beauty in an amazing way (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Avy Vera (10/22/2010 10:17:00 AM)

    the poem is simple yet meaningful..Loving is not owning.Just let it go.He may be broke and jealous most of the times because of being far away with the girl symbolize by aphrodite or venus de milo, but he can be happier and wiser just by letting things happen.I also believe that if two people are meant to be..fate will find a way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fred Babbin (9/5/2010 2:12:00 PM)

    It cuts. My Venus de Milo (from '43) died in '83. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eman Obied (8/25/2010 8:05:00 PM)

    I love your writing style, :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (8/3/2010 1:12:00 PM)

    The poem itself is a masterpiece. The last stanza uplifts the whole poem and turns it from personal to universal meanings. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tyrone Allen (5/18/2010 6:15:00 PM)

    one of the best i read yet. i am surprise that one is not famous yet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (5/13/2010 10:58:00 AM)

    Resonant imagery! Nicely written! ! (Report) Reply



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