Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 175 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

A monkey of my apple tree


we are just familiar with our great ancestors
who taught us a way to lead this beautiful life
and we are ultimately losing their faith
are we leading the life the way they imagined
they were innocent, they were pious in nature
they really taught us the reasons for our survival,
and the way we mislead them, is this a fair cheating,
yeah, surely it is, as we are not proving to be humans
and the hate virus inside us has made us a virus too
these are my captured thoughts i feel it free
whenever i look at the monkey of my apple tree.

Submitted: Monday, June 17, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 17, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 38,094 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/19/2013 11:20:00 AM)

    Every generation repeats the same Past is Past, a glorious one we are losing the glory of the world for our own benefits....Echo Friendly..we see AC is not, Vehicle is not still we see we are lost the love and indulged in lust, lust of all kind (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,085 Points Hazel Durham (6/17/2013 9:25:00 AM)

    Soul searching for truth and goodness and to stamp out the awful decay that is hate!
    Hate breeds misery and evil to destroy ourselves in the end!
    An excellent write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (6/17/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other.
    Mother Teresa
    beautiful thinking Vishal just keep your thoughts running like that and you'll be a fine writer one day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/17/2013 6:47:00 AM)

    wao what a metaphorical use of virus, monkey & tree, virus of hypocrisy, envy & prejudice spoiling the innocence & our beliefs...well done Vishal u created very thought provoking poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/17/2013 2:00:00 AM)

    nice sentiment
    i like it very much
    great write vishal (Report) Reply

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