Queeny Gona

Freshman - 936 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

A Modern Life! - Poem by Queeny Gona

Huckle Buckle and a tramp in the trammel
Colorful counters
Here-there, to and fro wherever I gaze
Simply superb, twinkling corners
Rat-tat-tat Squeezed lub dubs
with boogie-woogie decisions

Huh Huh! Excited am I
For in valence state
Couldn't orbit long
Around you dear
Yet did I
Until collided with my honey - oohs-aahs!

Tic-tic! Table in Un-stable, with myriad
Disintegration, Spontaneous
My emotions exhibited
Scattering left-right and straight in the middle
Making life helter- skelter
Roller coaster circus feet! - chute-the-chute!

Stale-pale! tale never ends
With this little buzz, my life flies
Because it's vast - pervaded fast
Like phenomenal knots
Yet to crack
Reminding hoovers
Miles to go before I sleep deep - snails' numbness creep with each a heartache!


Comments about A Modern Life! by Queeny Gona

  • Rookie - 56 Points Vijay Sai R (12/3/2012 5:30:00 AM)

    a beautiful piece of poetry (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Herojit Philem (11/19/2012 12:44:00 AM)

    Rocking-corking...! Wiz
    Queen squeeze with feeling every wordsss..! ! ! ! Super-duper..nicely written..! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (10/10/2012 3:41:00 PM)

    Queen! This is amazing work - pure word play and feelings too! Yet u may write a positive poem.... thanks in advance - (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/10/2012 11:31:00 AM)

    could not long orbit around you dear----beautiful line/sensitive piece/penned with inner conviction (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, October 29, 2012


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