A Miner's Tears Poem by Joseph T. Renaldi

A Miner's Tears

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My chair is rocking back and forth,
Gazing at the scarred mountain slope.
Behold - an inactive mine and coal breaker
And a mound of refuse with little hope.
A coal-stripping pit filled with water,
Idle railroad tracks and polluted streams,
Remnants of a productive era of the past.
A time that is linked to repeated dreams,
Challenging the passageways below the earth,
Mindful of a family tradition to fulfill,
That created an excitement during my youth,
Strolling the path to the mine on the hill.
Now reminiscing - these later years,
Retired and that I older grow,
I seek my rocking chair and dream
Of the rugged coal miners of long ago.
There is something sort of special about
A coal mine that my memory supplies,
But the more I rock it seems the more
The tears get in my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 02 April 2006

Living in a coal mining community here in Utah, I can identify with this poem. I always thought, however, of the danger and back-breaking physical aspect of the job. Never thought that you would actually enjoy it. Thanks for the different perspective from a miner's point of view. Linda

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Ernestine Northover 22 September 2005

This is another moving poem Joseph. A lovely picture drawn with words. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 December 2004

Well-executed and touching verse.

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Emma Anderson 17 December 2004

What a wonderfull poem.

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Joseph T. Renaldi

Joseph T. Renaldi

Frackville, Pennsylvania
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