A Milestone Of The Heart Poem by M Rene Riel

A Milestone Of The Heart

Rating: 3.8


A milestone of the heart
Has the wind for a friend
Tis inspiration for the soul
That stays true to the end.

A milestone of the heart
Is a road's lightened breeze
Tis the spirit of a friendship
Heard laughing in the trees.

A milestone of the heart
May be but a disguise
Tis the spirit of its knowledge
And whispers of the wize.

A milestone of the heart
May beat steady and slow
Tis the making of the wind
Where kindred spirits grow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 21 September 2009

A lilting meaningful poem with a last line that sews it up with skill a milestone of your heart +++++10 kind regards

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Kesav Easwaran 11 May 2009

yes; inspirational write...the second stanza lines i most liked...10

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a superb and magnificent poem..truly perfect! great write!

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Well crafted and done, dear fellow poet Rene Riel. I give it a 9++ (Poems about 'Heart' are difficult to fetch a 10) . Yet, you are a gifted talent. If you choose other themes you can approach high levels of quality poetry. Thanks for sharing

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Emily Oldham 20 September 2008

this is beautiful. that's all i can say. it's beautiful, a wonderful poem. thanks

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M Rene Riel

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Plattsburgh New York USA
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