A Mental Pause Poem by suzan gumush

A Mental Pause

Rating: 4.9


I've come to a mental block
It's called a mental pause
It's Blocked all my writings
And I can't focus on my sitings
Those hot flushes
Do rush in fast!
How long will this whole thing last!
It's driving me crazy
Sometimes I just want to be lazy
What the heck!
It's turning my life
Into a reck!
Sometimes I feel muddled
I just need to have a good cuddle
Well anyway!
Like all you men say
It's just another excuse
For us women
to have our own way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philip Teed 04 November 2006

Nicely put. I would agree that most men say that.

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Trinity K 04 November 2006

suzan, you are right....you just need a cuddle.... now is the time male menopause come into focus....its as real as... female excuse.....bravo....

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Linda Ori 05 November 2006

Nice piece of writing, Suzan. You put it all into perspective! Linda

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David Gerardino 06 November 2006

great poem, there are times when i cannot come up with any ideas, so what i do is read, , , some times its works other times not, , , , ,

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 November 2006

NOT WRITERS B L O C K! My God, Susan, if this is contagious, this site will go down in less than 24 hrs! lol! Hey, we have all been there, & i for one am th' laziest when it happens, cuz i just don't want to deal w/ it...Because th' bottomline is if you are a good writer, which you most certainly are...the block will break when you least expect...you can't force it...all you can do is ride itout, with th' rest of us.i hear tell that Chaucer had horrific writing blocks, yet, the Canterbury Tales still came to be...' A Mental Pause 'is is a great piece on everything YOUneed not worry about, young lady! Nice Job''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R

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Raj Nandy 08 August 2008

A good poem, written with frankness and intelligence! I enjoyed reading it both as a poet & also as a Homeopath Doc! -Raj Nandy

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Dawn Slanker 06 August 2008

Very fun and creative...I enjoyed this greatly.

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Malini Kadir 26 March 2008

Lovely way to put it! fun to read enjoyed it! .

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Barry Van Allen 26 January 2008

Suzan, Who spilled the beans? You are not supposed to know that we know that! B.V.A.

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Chuck Audette 17 January 2008

fun one! I'd rather find myself in the middle of a mental pause than in the middle of a tiger's paws. -chuck

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