A Memoir Poem by Akhil Zoomin

A Memoir

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oh! do you want me to say about it?
well, how do i start
from the infinite
nights spent thinking about her?

there are infinite summer afternoon's
waiting outside her home
just to catch a glimpse of her

there are infinite shivering winter evening's
which i spent walking around her home

there are infinite rainy days
drenched and soaked in rain,
rain never allowed anyone to
look at my tears

I use to laugh at people
who write poems of this kind
I thought they are mentally retorted

recalling those funny memories(seriously)
recalling those romantic moments
recalling those times
how she use to take care of me

she wants me to eat well
she wants me to sleep well,

even though
I never cared about them
because as long as she is there
for me
I don't give a damn about these
stupid things

being in her arms is my shelter
kissing her is my food
lip-locking her is my water

oh! dear how do you think
that
I am gonna live when you
snatch everything away from
me

Tuesday, January 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: memoir
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 January 2015

A sensational sentiments lovesick poem. Written in excellent style. Do pls review my latest poem too.

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Rajnish Manga 13 January 2015

Every word of the poem is an essential part of the personal memoir which is full of romantic nostalgia. Great poem. I would like to quote from your poem: well, how do i start... / waiting outside her home / just to catch a glimpse of her /.... rain never allowed / anyone to /look at my tears.

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