A Mansion Of Bliss Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

A Mansion Of Bliss

Rating: 5.0


Love was agape
And earth too began to shake
When they saw divine and his lover
in a secret soul's bower
hugging in adoration's lap

During blushing daybreak
they surreptitiously escaped
to roam on
love drawn map
on Venus landscapes
Wherein flows, love kissed lakes
tickled by devotion's sheldrakes

The mansion
adored by the ruby's swastika
bedecked by diamond's obelisks:
Wherein incandescent chandeliers,
tease by romantic breeze
sings the songs of divine bliss

They retired in love's mansion,
built ever for joyous occasion,
Where jewels of balconies
embraces the palaces,
perching on rosy colonies

They merge in each other
till their breath stopped to labor.
At last, their love for each other ceased
For super soul and soul merged
seamlessly without crease!

Dr Hitesh C Sheth

13/02/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 14 February 2009

A majestic mansion with glitter and gleam in which the divine lovers dance in trance. Superbly unique imagery with scrupulously chosen scholatic diction and perfect flow. CP

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 14 February 2009

superb written sir.well expressed and nice feelings... really a god gift to all poets here as valenties day gift....

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Seema Chowdhury 14 February 2009

lovely thoughts and emotions expressed in this poem. thanks for sharing.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 February 2009

A mansion of huge poetry you have got there my friend.

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 February 2009

a poetry that is adorned with priceless stones...very meaningful very valuable.....gleaming with beauty... and touching our hearts....divinely..a MANSION of love... a mansion of Soul...a mansion where God dwells... very wholesome..words are superbly chosen.... and the theme is chosen from heart.... a piece with wonderful imagery... i love this...goes to my favorites... 10+++

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Kee Thampi 07 January 2012

nature is the mother of humanity the saviour During blushing daybreak they surreptitiously escaped to roam on love drawn map on Venus landscapes Wherein flows, love kissed lakes

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divine romance there...lovely

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Obinna Eruchie 28 May 2009

a beautiful romantic poem with vivid imagery.

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again an other beautiful reading...

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Bonnie Collins 14 April 2009

What a lovely romantic write, and filled with much vivid imagery... Very nice job....

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