Love was agape
And earth too began to shake
When they saw divine and his lover
in a secret soul's bower
hugging in adoration's lap
During blushing daybreak
they surreptitiously escaped
to roam on
love drawn map
on Venus landscapes
Wherein flows, love kissed lakes
tickled by devotion's sheldrakes
The mansion
adored by the ruby's swastika
bedecked by diamond's obelisks:
Wherein incandescent chandeliers,
tease by romantic breeze
sings the songs of divine bliss
They retired in love's mansion,
built ever for joyous occasion,
Where jewels of balconies
embraces the palaces,
perching on rosy colonies
They merge in each other
till their breath stopped to labor.
At last, their love for each other ceased
For super soul and soul merged
seamlessly without crease!
Dr Hitesh C Sheth
13/02/2009
superb written sir.well expressed and nice feelings... really a god gift to all poets here as valenties day gift....
lovely thoughts and emotions expressed in this poem. thanks for sharing.
A mansion of huge poetry you have got there my friend.
a poetry that is adorned with priceless stones...very meaningful very valuable.....gleaming with beauty... and touching our hearts....divinely..a MANSION of love... a mansion of Soul...a mansion where God dwells... very wholesome..words are superbly chosen.... and the theme is chosen from heart.... a piece with wonderful imagery... i love this...goes to my favorites... 10+++
nature is the mother of humanity the saviour During blushing daybreak they surreptitiously escaped to roam on love drawn map on Venus landscapes Wherein flows, love kissed lakes
What a lovely romantic write, and filled with much vivid imagery... Very nice job....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A majestic mansion with glitter and gleam in which the divine lovers dance in trance. Superbly unique imagery with scrupulously chosen scholatic diction and perfect flow. CP